The bite of winter
crawls forward,
moving slowly, so slowly
over the surface of the earth….
sharp and stinging
bitter and blue.
It shocks and stuns
as it moves from the north
dipping down
slowly…. slowly
through the night
across the plains,
mountains and low places.
Ever moving,
creeping down
from the north
from the sky
bringing every living thing
to it’s knees.
The icy blast,
the hard, cold knives
of air and wind
cut through every inch
of space
and shows itself
to be more powerful
than anything
man can do
or say
or be.
(this poem is the intellectual property of The Nocturnal Laundress ~ Julie Nichols © 2016)
I accidentally flagged your comment. I’m sorry, it was not intentional. I responded on my blog, though. I hope I flag you in general. I’m still getting used to WordPress mobile.
I’m not familiar with flagging, not sure what it means (I’m still sort of a novice here too)….anyway, don’t worry about it…get some sleep and have a good day tomorrow!
I hope I didn’t flag you in general. I love your feedback, and I love reading your poetry. It’s lovely!
Thanks Posi!! I’m sure it will be okay. Not sure what flagging is all about but I doubt there will be any harm. I thank you for the kind comments!
Haunting. The moon within the moon works very well with your poem too. Thank you for sharing. Hope you are well. Happy new year.
Thanks Vic….it is so bitter cold here and it feels especially eerie late at night. This cold snap is supposed to go for at least the next week…..tomorrow night’s wind chill will be in the 35 below zero category. I can’t even imagine it. I don’t want to go anywhere. It’s weird when it gets this cold….. the poem just sort of flowed out of me. Thanks again for the kind comments. P.S. I don’t remember if you accept awards, but I just nominated you for one. You can find the details here: https://teeks55.wordpress.com/2014/01/03/a-heartfelt-thank-you/
Happy New Year!!
Reblogged this on The Nocturnal Laundress and commented:
Since it is again bitter cold here in the midwest, I thought I’d reblog this poem. I daresay I’m ready for spring.
This is really great Julie, once again I’m reminded why I still live in the south! 🙂